The Talent Code

Oh nice, The Talent Code, by Daniel Coyle is available online, http://thetalentcode.com/excerpt/

Comments:

Really well written!

Daniel builds up a lot of images to the reader.
This is done by describing the looks of things even if the looks are not important for the message of the story itself. He also uses common images like The Darwin Beagle to force the reader to build an internal image.

He connects the beginning to the end

Strange that he mentions visiting nine places but only tells us about a few of them, maybe leaving stuff out for the next couple of chapters?

He uses humor. Like the 8year old beating him at tennis.


to be continued...